Teodoro Lamond: this is the firsat time i have ever read anything so long. . i am from toronto, and now live on an island in the pacific. life is very different here.....the same, but different. i suppose i evny the fact that you are multilingual and livedd in the mideast, these are things i really wish i could have done. what a fascinating story...thank youedit:i myself have never submitted a college application essay so i cannot say if it is very good or not...Show more
Leif Andreason: "such as ability" should be "such as THE ability"it's kind of boring. it just keeps talking about how you keep moving to different places
Renato Abatiell: I posted this before but it was deleted for some reason. I need to submit this college application essay for review tomorrow, so please offer honest, unbiased opinion on its structure, constructions, and other aspects. Also, tell what you like/dislike about it. Please also consider that this is a descriptive/narrative essay! , not a rhetorical one, so it is not thesis oriented. I hope that it also helps you to form ideas for your existing work. Thank you for being a good Samaritan....Show more
Lizzette Wendroth: I totally didn't read that. WaitNo....Show more
Sheron Perrez: Candy Bar
Andre Winegar: I have enough reading to do.
Roxane Leathers: Tl;dr
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